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crying freeman



Joined: 16 Jul 2005
Posts: 161
Location: The Netherlands

PostPosted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 6:06 am    Post subject: Please review my site Reply with quote

Hello forum memebers.

I'd like your opinion about my site The Dogs of Amazon. I recently changed it and have put unique content on it which was written by pro's.

All comments are welcome as I am doing the best I can to Provide visitors with fresh content and make this site interesting.

Thanks,

C.F.
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AllanGardyne
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Joined: 02 Jul 2003
Posts: 5839
Location: by the beach, Australia

PostPosted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 8:37 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hi CF, The site shows promise. It's not a bad start. I must admit I find the domain name a bit unusual. However, that might work in your favor and help people remember you.

About the main page... Your task as an affiliate is to help your visitor decide what to buy. You're not really doing that. The main article merely tells the visitor to take your advice. You rewrite this article a little so that it works as slippery chute, gradually leading the visitor towards making a buying decision, and ends with an affiliate link to a product you recommend.

I noticed you appear to have the same title on several pages - maybe all your pages. Perhaps you just haven't done the page titles yet, but if you want each page to have a chance of being found in search engines, you'll need to use different, appropriate titles for all your pages.

You could run a spellcheck over the site, too. I noticed "ABSOLUTLEY" and "recources" (in a link).

Also the "Sell your products through Click Bank" link is totally off-topic. I think you'll have more success if you stick to promoting dog-related products on this site. Always try to see your site through your visitor's eyes. Your typical visitor searching for dog info isn't thinking about selling products.
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crying freeman



Joined: 16 Jul 2005
Posts: 161
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 8:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you for your reply Allan, I really appreciate advice from a pro like you.

Solid advice which I will take to heart, will correct the typo's today and ask my writer at Need an Article to write up an intro for the main page, as well as another article for an ezine to create traffic for my site.

Regards,

C.F.
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