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niz85
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Posted: Mon Oct 04, 2004 2:59 pm
Post subject: Please review my NEW site!
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Ladies and Gentlemen,
I have recently finished making a new web site on vitamins and nutrients.
It is http://www.vitaminsdiary.com/
What do you guyz think about it?
I think I have done a good job.... 
Any suggestions of improving the site and making it the authority site in its field?
All types of suggestions are welcome.
Thanks in advance.
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hamesy
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Posted: Mon Oct 04, 2004 6:31 pm
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Hi Niz,
I can see that you have worked hard on this website. The design is well suited for the content. The only problem I have with the layout is how far you have to scroll to get to the bottom of the page. Are all those links necessary and could create another page to put your articles on? I can see why you want the affiliate links on almost every page, but is the user really going to scroll all the way down to the bottom?
While viewing your website I done something I wouldn't normally, I started to take interest in a subject I'm not bothered about. If you can get me to take interest, then it shouldn't take much to get other people interested 
I also like the 'Health Tip' on each page. Very useful and interesting.
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Declan OReilly
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Posted: Tue Oct 05, 2004 1:30 am
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Hi Niz,
I agree with Hamesy. Coming from a publishing/magazine design background I would suggest that your site looks a little cluttered. Perhaps you should keep the ads by Google at the top and bottom of the page and move the articles column into the left hand side also.
In the 'Buying Vitamins Online' section you should be clear about what the visitor should do and tell them the benefits of taking vitamins. Maybe reconsider making this the focus of your site.
| Quote: | | You can find great deals, if you decide to buy vitamins and supplements online. Look for a reputed online store offering quality vitamins at competitive prices. Plus, it should have good services too. One such store to buy vitamins is vitacost.com. We dont know even a single person who is unhappy with them. |
This would not convince me to visit this site. You need to reword this to be a lot more convincing. If you are an affiliate for a vitamin company you could use their creatives on your site.
How about a section on how to take vitamins and who shouldn't take certain vitamins such as pregnant women. Tailor your website for different types of people such as young, older, sports people, expectant mothers etc, make recommendations and use testimonies.
Overall it is a very useful resource.
Declan
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niz85
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Posted: Sat Oct 30, 2004 12:29 pm
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Thankyou people for your time and suggestions. I am working on that.
More reviews are welcome.
www.vitaminsdiary.com
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