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Pls review my site , thks a lot!

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helepat



Joined: 23 May 2004
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PostPosted: Mon May 31, 2004 12:08 pm    Post subject: Pls review my site , thks a lot! Reply with quote

Hi

Pls review my site , thks a lot!

http://www.anime-dvd-guide.com

Pat
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Timothy Warnock



Joined: 08 Aug 2003
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 01, 2004 9:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

helepat,

What would you like people to do most on your site?

What is your site particularly unique in offering?

Make a list:

1)...
2)
3)

You have no clear goal(s). Visitors will leave without a clear direction - I counted at least 10 different (and very vague) suggestions you give your visitors as options (including getting a cup of coffee and watching out for their bosses!)

Your text needs to be highly goal oriented - without extra fluff that wastes space and time. You also need an editor to clean up some of the obvious grammatical mistakes - it doesn't need to be perfect, just get rid of the obvious mistakes.

If Adsense is your main goal - that's fine, if not, take it off your home page - it distracts.

If you can now answer my questions, I and others can help you further.

All the best,

Tim
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snowman



Joined: 10 Jun 2004
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 13, 2004 3:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hi there,

This is a nice site with a lot of potential.

Some comments.....

There is too much text on your home page and there are some typos you need to sort out -
Quote:
Scare to order a brand, new DVD player over the Net?
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I would bring the links to the top of the home page, as few visitors will see them down there.

I would make the graphic smaller, or get rid of it - its fun but I'm not sure it helps much.

Anyway, I think its a good start so good luck with it.


Ray
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