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JonJG
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Posted: Mon Jun 22, 2009 5:27 pm
Post subject: Please review my site about health and fitness
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| I created it for Adsense and affiliate programs. It's been up for almost 4 months now and I barely get any traffic. I'd appreciate every suggestion to optimize it. Thank you very much. Here's the link: Weight Loss |
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jonathanfigaro
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Posted: Mon Jun 22, 2009 10:23 pm
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| I think your website, is really nice. I like the lime green background. It gives off a serene feeling. |
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Toni
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Posted: Sun Jun 28, 2009 11:27 am
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JonJG hi,
The WE in your header graphic is not focusing on the customer - remember it's all about them.
Maybe a slogan - Caring About YOUR Health
Your headline - A Look on Diet Fitness: Losing Weight The Healthy Way is not riveting enough for me the viewer to want to read further into your copy. A suggestion would be to research what other weight loss websites are using as their headlines and devise one of your own from what grabs you.
Also what makes your site different from the Gazillion of other Weight Loss / Fitness websites?
Who are Vital Signs? Is there a face behind this site?
Have you tried using video on your website?
Hope this helps you on your way.
Toni
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