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PatDom
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Posted: Tue Jun 16, 2009 2:08 am
Post subject: Request to review UltimateEntrepreneurToolkit
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Hello, could you please consider reviewing my new sales letter:
http://www.ultimateentrepreneurtoolkit.com/preview.html
I've tried to keep it simple yet compelling. If there is anything that you think could help conversions, or make this offer more affiliate friendly, please let me know.
Your feedback would help me with this site as well as others I am developing.
Thank you in advance for taking the time to read my question and/or write back to me.
Cheers,
Patrick |
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jonathanfigaro
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Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2009 10:12 pm
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| Website is good, But you need to tone the features and express more of the benefits that people will receive , when they buy your product. People want to know why they should buy? Benefits , benefits, benefits,! The more the you give the better! |
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