sudhir
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Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 4:36 am
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Hi Everybody on this Fantastic Forum,
Please review my blogs and give your opinions about the quality of articles, choice of articles. It is important - I am basically a writer and I intend starting an article writing service.
Sudhirsai
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Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 9:34 pm
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If you write the links in your signature out in full, like this...
http://netgains-sudhirbhatt.blogspot.com
...the links will be clickable on this forum. That will make it much easier for forum members to visit your blogs.
The article by Ralph Wilson on that blog would be easier to read if you put some line spacing before each sub-heading.
Also, you probably need to use a spellcheck on everything you write. For example, "variuos" should be "various".
Much more important than that... you've chosen an intensely competitive niche. If you do that, you need a USP - unique selling point. What's special about you or about the advice you're giving.
If there are many thousands of sites which provide similar information, why should people go to yours? Why should they link to yours? You need to be able to answer that question. If you can't, perhaps you're in the wrong niche.
Another point... Would you go to a free Blogger blog to learn about Internet marketing? Probably not, so why would you expect your visitors to? You have to see things from your visitors' point of view.
A free Blogger blog is much more appropriate for your math fun blog. On that blog, you could make it look more attractive if you broke up those large blocks of type - create smaller paragraphs with line spacing between the paragraphs.
Re-read your "About Me" section and see if you can improve the punctuation. Credibility is hugely important. You say you've taught English but you rather oddly write "english" with a lower case "e". I understand English (with a capital "E") isn't your first language, but your punctuation shouldn't be so erratic. For example, never hit the space bar before a comma. Always hit the space bar after a full stop (or period as Americans call them). Small mistakes can make big impressions.
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