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711alr
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Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 1:02 pm
Post subject: Please tell me what's wrong
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I built my first website ever, as well as being my first affiliate site. If you could take a look at it and tell me why i'm not getting traffic or making any money. I would appreciate it very much. thanx.
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InternetMarketing_IQ
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Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 7:17 pm
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It's very generic. I didn't get the connection of your name to the what you are doing until I started reading a bit. You have SECONDS to make that connection.
You need to change your title graphic and text so it absolutely SCREAMS what your site is about.
You need to work on Headlines that pull your reader/audience into the article.
It's written in a very passive style.
How many of your visitors believe they are a "Mamma"? Is that a positive way they would view themselves?
Does anyone search the term Mamma? Do visitors draw the connection between Auction and Mamma? Although we know Ebay is an Auction site, is that really how the average person views the site?
You need to work on really figuring out who your target demographic is and deliver them what they want.
But first work on the Headline.
Think about your visitor.
"Mother of 3 Earns $1,500 a month with Ebay Auctions and here is EXACTLY how you can too"
That's kind of a lame first attempt, but I'd never work Ebay from your angle. I work Ebay strictly from a product sales standpoint.
Anyways you have a lot to think about and need to revisit who you are targeting and what they want.
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