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subodhjain82
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Posted: Thu Nov 18, 2004 3:23 am
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Hi Everyone,
I have recently making a new web site on cosmetics, beauty and make up tips.
It is http://www.bestincosmetics.com/
What do you guyz think about it?
I think I have done a good ...
Thanks
subodh[/url]
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dcristo
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Posted: Thu Nov 18, 2004 8:43 am
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subodhjain82
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hi
thanks for notify me. now url is working.
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edburdo
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The blue and orange and white sorta clash. I would lessen the blue from your menu. Go lighter, or narrower.
And you have some grammatical errors in your content. That can hurt your credibility.
I would also turn your header text (the BestInCosmetics.com portion) into a link back to your homepage. Fairly standard practice these days.
And I would also be consistent in your titles. Some of your pages have upper case, others title case. And some have your site in the title, some do not.
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