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helepat



Joined: 23 May 2004
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PostPosted: Sun May 23, 2004 8:43 am    Post subject: Please review my site, thanks a lot! Reply with quote

Hello

Please review my site and give your comments.
Thanks!

http://www.anime-dvd-guide.com

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PostPosted: Sun May 23, 2004 9:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ok i am not exactly a web page guru, in fact i have only built the one i have now. But i will make a comment as a consumer for you. If i cant see where to navigate, how am i supposed to find my way through your site. The very first thing i saw when i went to the page was the navigation bar was practically the same color as the back ground. Extremely hard to read, infact so hard i simply left the page and didnt browse any further. i would make that a little more eye friendly, just cant see what it says. Good luck
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Debs



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PostPosted: Sun May 23, 2004 11:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

After reviewing several pages, I find it hard to believe the SBI Analyzer passed those pages, particularly your home page. Now, that may be as you want it, but some SE's will have a problem with your keyphrase density.

I think you have too many links in your navbar, and not enough content. Most of the pages listed there hardsell, they don't presell. You may want to reread the Action Guide, do some revisions, and add more real content.

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