The first thing I noticed is your content rides tight to your navigation bar, which makes for an odd appearance. You need to add some spacing or padding between them.
The other thing I noticed is you have the Scales of Justice in your site design and they just don' t fit. I was thinking you were a lawyer until I read your intro.
The third thing I noticed was you don't have any striking example on your home page. You are selling art, but you stuck them away in your portfolio, and with the exception of one picture, none are of good enough quality (picture wise) to do your art justice.
If you need to make your pics bigger, do so. Just keep them one to a page to help keep page loading time reasonable.
Talk about the quality of your work, the detail, how you bring it to life but do it in such a way that your visitors feel you speaking to them, telling them what benefits they will get from owning one of your artworks. Remember, people want to know what is in it for them, not what you are all about.
The next thing I noticed was a typo on your contact page, Email Address, not Adress.
Your "Other Ideas" page threw me off the mark, I was expecting art related items, and found links that had nothing to do with your site.
Your FAQ page was great, until the last item, which also had absolutely nothing to do with your site and looks totally out of place. Shifted the whole focus of your site. Keep your FAQ about the main focus of your site, selling art.
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Joined: 14 Jul 2003 Posts: 1750 Location: Bangor, Maine
Posted: Wed Mar 24, 2004 2:10 pm Post subject:
I hope I caught your site in the middle of some updates. But here is a couple things I noticed.
Your opening quote is not the same size as the rest of your font text.
The banner link at the bottom of the page is just a link. Don't you want that as an actual banner displaying?
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