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Lynn at Reversing Obesity
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Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2004 7:56 pm
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Is my sales letter long enough to sell my product?
Lynn at Reversing Obesity
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StrayPixel
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I think its a good length. Frankly, I hate the extremely long sales letters that just drag on and on. Im actually writing a sales letter for a product right now and plan on keeping it short, but sweet.
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kidino
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I think the length and the structure of your salecopy is great. I didn't really read it thoroughly though but seeing the sub-headings that you have and the length of one sub-heading to another would always justify the total length of the salescopy. At least that is how I feel ...
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tonychel
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Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2004 7:16 am
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Hi Lynn,
The length is just right.
The only missing here are "Testimonials" to make the sales copy
will become more credible.
How do you get testimoanials? If you haven't got one, offer
your ebook for Free or with discount in exchange for Testimonials.
Good luck on your venture. Hope this helps.
Cheers! 
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Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2004 8:28 am
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Although not a site as such, this is a request for a review. Accordingly, I've re-located it to the review section but left a shadow-link in the previous forum.
Hope this helps.
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Timothy Warnock
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Posted: Tue Mar 30, 2004 4:27 pm
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Lynn,
That is some good copy!
Come on, tell me the truth, who wrote it? In any case they/you? know how to write good copy.
My compliments.
This is going to succeed. My only doubt is that you have probably posted this to every forum you could find, knowing full well that this is good copy and will convert - nifty trick, a bit spammy for my tastes, but nonetheless slick. Is your name really Lynn? 
Tim
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Phil Tanny
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Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2004 3:01 am
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Tim!
Uh oh, here I go again with my copy rant...
How can this be good copy if you don't even believe that's their real name?
Rhetorical question if you like, you've suffered bravely through this rant enough already elsewhere. 
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