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stevenyap
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Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 4:07 am
Post subject: Please Review My Site - Not Sure What Went Wrong !
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Hey guys,
How are you?
Steven Yap from Web20KeywordFinder.com.
The site is already live but something might not be right.
Anyway to make it even better.
Please comment.
http://www.Web20KeywordFinder.com
Thanks.
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ubonline
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Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 5:32 pm
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Steve, nice idea, here are some thoughts:
- Must scroll down to read headline, too much "stuff" in the white area on top, then too much stuff above the headline (and below the logo).
- Why the login form on top left? Makes me think I must buy something first. Not that a login is bad, but there is no context (like "member login").
- The screenshots are hidden low on the page, might want to move them up higher.
Hope this helps, good luck!
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worldstage
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Posted: Fri Jul 16, 2010 7:50 pm
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I'm not a big fan of misspelled words, and there are some here and there throughout your presentation.
I know we all do it, but perhaps you could proofread again.
Also (and I know this is also par for the course with a lot of affiliate pages I've seen), I really don't like long long LONG, endless amounts of stuff to have to read to get your point or your pitch.
I personally think that if you need that much explanation, you sound kind of amateurish and desperate. Hell I've been there. I think I'm still there!
But there are zillions of websites that look like yours, and after a while I get incredibly tired of reading them and looking at them. I have no doubt most people do.
I just end up scrolling to see how long I would have had to read to see what you're actually selling.
And if it's too damn long, then I just don't bother.
Hope this helps.
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